Topic: J M Dorsey Halo High

[piersdad]

J M Dorsey is the real name of the author  of Halo High and she started here as Jennifers stories the progress she has made in the few years in this forum has been amazing and i recon she will soon be a famous writer 
her style is unique.
she is writing a second book and i will be reading it a soon as it gets done.

most stories i read are just re hashes of well worn plots over and over again like
 an American movie with the required car crash and shooting and deaths.

she has a refreshing approach to writing
so buy a copy of halo high and in years to come it will be a precious book  the first written by a famous author.

just realized my own mother had an experience of a halo.

From that day on (after dad died)  mustard would sleep any where in the house but not dads bed.
A year passed and one night mother woke up in the middle of the night and ‘saw’ dad at the end of the bed  and she heard him say “good by dear”  just as he would always say when he went to work.

Then she said an amazing thing happened mustard the cat strolled in and leapt on to dads bed and started purring loudly.

http://www.storydad.com/forum/index.php/topic,253.msg1187.html#msg1187

and my own experience when i was about 8 years old one earlymorning i 'saw' a largebrown dog walk into and out of the room -- very scary that was

[J.M.Dorsey]

thanks, piersdad. just fixing a few things in the book, lol. found a few questionable pieces. there's always room for editing, that's for sure.

[piersdad]

found 3 places where  -- he bet her-- instead he beat her at  auto spell said ok bet should be beat

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